my two cents as an affiliate – stay true to what would turn you on when you write it. paying porn surfers can smell when a website is clearly trying to sell the description on some outrageous fantasy. write what really goes down in the scene, don’t make stuff up or call clearly gay guys straight. its lame when the text says they “pound away like a jackhammer” when the fucking is slow and boring .
i’d just recommend being honest – you can def throw in good “buzz” words in terms of SEO, but, it irks me when the descriptions are phony.